shintsukimi205 2021-05-17 05:45:45

Hm...
Alright, I'll give it a listen!

shintsukimi205 2021-05-17 06:10:01

Let's see...
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spooky harp!!! - Well, it's quite the spooky harp, and even the start portrays it as such. Even with the melodies this harp plays portrays it quite subtly.
i dont wanna see cus its dark - To me, it sort of portrays a mysterious kind of feeling, especially when you feel as if it's best you never know the answer, because who knows that lays in the darkness? (Also saw that this would be for your friends novel, even if I haven't seen it myself, and most likely will not ever, to me, this would be quite fitting for the 'introductory' of the story.)
h-helpp im si-iiick - I feel as if it really portrays the 'sticky situation' you're in, that being, well, being sick, and I like to imagine that somewhere in the end, that's when you try calling for help, to no avail, only for it to repeat again and again until someone answers that call.
uh oh it's got some traps - I can definitely sense the feel of urgency, and those distinctive melodies really portray that well.
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Overall, listening to all 4 of them, you're going somewhere! Though this will be coming from someone who's not that much of an expert in making music, so take this with a grain of salt, but to me, it could really 'stand out' more if you add more melodies to help it. But with that, I can't help but think that, well, you're doing good, as I could definitely see this being heard in a small projects of sorts.

shintsukimi205 2021-05-17 06:41:06

@shintsukimi205 @tackbackwards Hey, no problem! Hopes this helps!